These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.

Please publish your work on NovelStar. For sure a lot of readers will love your work. There are also a lot of talented writers in the platform that you might want to work with.

Yay, another chapter!

As always, this is a very neat read. It's always amusing to hear the gods' bickering, and I love the attention to detail and accuracy that you keep to the ancient Egyptian ways.

Also, I like Hatshepsut; she already seems like a just and noble presence without yet being a ruler. A well-written scene, and I can't wait for the conclusion! )

You updated! I'm so happy!

Glad to see you're back! ) No need to apologize; I certainly know how real life gets in the way or that you may just simply lose the motivation for writing. x3 Your followers will still hang around; no reason not to. And I can't wait to see how this all ends! It's getting exciting!

I have been reading your story for a while, and I LOVE IT! I hope that it doesn't end, because it is fantastic, and I love the way you write. The one thing I have is that some of your facts (like how you said Hime had brown eyes, but later you mentioned that they were blue) are slightly incorrect, but other than that DONT CHANGE A THING! I am super interested in where this is going to go, so update when you can! I'm eager for another chapter!

Sorrow leads to fear, fear leads to hate, hate... LEADS TO THE DARK SIDE

Come on, update! This story is really good, and its at an awful cliffie...

Another awesome chapter; I'm on the edge of my seat! The meeting between Auset and Anpu was very sweet, too. I love how the gods are involved; now even Bast makes an appearance. Usually I like her, but right now...we'll see. x3 Keep it up!

I just finished reading all of this, and I loved it, every chapter. This is an awesome story, and I'm very interested. You write well and the plot has me hooked, and I love your characters. Please continue!

Woo, I'm glad you're keeping on writing this, it's still interesting. ) Can't wait to see what happens next! Also I think I know the names of the wolf and the snake, but I'll wait until next time to be sure. x3

I'm a sucker for anything ancient Egyptian, and you're doing a fantastic job!

I'm still interested. :)

Interesting new character, introducedin a way very good for literature

I don't like her aunt so far, she's a mean person.i wonder why Auset hasn't run away yet