Reviews for Desert Princess
Guest chapter 22 . 6/24/2022
Ah this is such a fun read
Can’t wait for more! It seems like the hard part of the journey is almost over
Joeson chapter 1 . 4/19/2021
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
Singer of Time chapter 21 . 8/6/2018
Yay, another chapter!

As always, this is a very neat read. It's always amusing to hear the gods' bickering, and I love the attention to detail and accuracy that you keep to the ancient Egyptian ways.

Also, I like Hatshepsut; she already seems like a just and noble presence without yet being a ruler. A well-written scene, and I can't wait for the conclusion! )
BetweenSunAndMoon chapter 19 . 1/3/2017
You updated! I'm so happy!
Singer of Time chapter 19 . 1/3/2017
Glad to see you're back! ) No need to apologize; I certainly know how real life gets in the way or that you may just simply lose the motivation for writing. x3 Your followers will still hang around; no reason not to. And I can't wait to see how this all ends! It's getting exciting!
IHateCliffhanger chapter 18 . 3/9/2016
I have been reading your story for a while, and I LOVE IT! I hope that it doesn't end, because it is fantastic, and I love the way you write. The one thing I have is that some of your facts (like how you said Hime had brown eyes, but later you mentioned that they were blue) are slightly incorrect, but other than that DONT CHANGE A THING! I am super interested in where this is going to go, so update when you can! I'm eager for another chapter!
ADFG3363 chapter 17 . 11/13/2015
Sorrow leads to fear, fear leads to hate, hate... LEADS TO THE DARK SIDE
Guest chapter 17 . 10/18/2015
Come on, update! This story is really good, and its at an awful cliffie...
Singer of Time chapter 17 . 9/12/2015
Another awesome chapter; I'm on the edge of my seat! The meeting between Auset and Anpu was very sweet, too. I love how the gods are involved; now even Bast makes an appearance. Usually I like her, but right now...we'll see. x3 Keep it up!
Copper.Sun chapter 16 . 9/5/2015
I just finished reading all of this, and I loved it, every chapter. This is an awesome story, and I'm very interested. You write well and the plot has me hooked, and I love your characters. Please continue!
Singer of Time chapter 16 . 9/4/2015
Woo, I'm glad you're keeping on writing this, it's still interesting. ) Can't wait to see what happens next! Also I think I know the names of the wolf and the snake, but I'll wait until next time to be sure. x3
BetweenSunAndMoon chapter 16 . 9/4/2015
I'm a sucker for anything ancient Egyptian, and you're doing a fantastic job!
BetweenSunAndMoon chapter 15 . 7/24/2015
I'm still interested. :)
Vamp712 chapter 3 . 3/16/2015
Interesting new character, introducedin a way very good for literature
Vamp712 chapter 2 . 3/16/2015
I don't like her aunt so far, she's a mean person.i wonder why Auset hasn't run away yet
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