Reviews for Of Coffee and Broken Elevators |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is too cute! Mark seems so nice and I'm glad him and Emily got together (well kind of!) at the end :D I love the way you write the consversations - they were really fluent and natural, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are pretty sweet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I feel a little sad for Mark but I'm glad they worked things out! :) |
![]() ![]() cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! That was super adorable. And I was listening to Passion Pit as I read it, so it totally doubled the effect(: I like how you acknowledged that getting stuck in an elevator with a cute boy was a cliche, because otherwise, it would be a cliche. Do you know what I mean? I thought it was a nice and realistic plot, and Mark's reaction to realizing it was Emily in the elevator was very believable. I did think Emily was a bit harsh when she was talking to Mark at the end, but having her strict criteria for guys is what you already showed, and it would definitely have moved too fast if she was like, yeah, totes let's date. So overall, lovely story!(: |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much! And i love the characters too! You really make the characters come alive in my mind! Can you continue this please if you can? I'm officially your fan! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the personality of Emily. I also love the story. I'm grinning! Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! Mark is an adorable dork. |
![]() ![]() loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was brilliant ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your writing and I like the overall story, but I really hate the character Emily Collins. Mainly because I think that having a 'list' is just too sadistic AND masochistic because HAVING a list just kills a relationship and, well, I dislike girls who have lists. But overall I REALLY LIKED IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's one of your first pieces of work and already you have a lot of reviews, my my my aren't we just the talented one? :P It was cute, well obviously. I have no good criticism although, I wish I did because then I wouldn't have to sound like a love struck teenager! Good luck with your next ideas for stories :D ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, totally cute story :D |