Reviews for Of Coffee and Broken Elevators
somersaultkick chapter 1 . 11/8
This is so sweet!
DenimKitty chapter 1 . 9/4
Super cute :)
DragonOwl chapter 1 . 7/27
This is too cute! Mark seems so nice and I'm glad him and Emily got together (well kind of!) at the end :D I love the way you write the consversations - they were really fluent and natural, too.
xEchoxInfernox chapter 1 . 7/7
They are pretty sweet :)
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Great story! I feel a little sad for Mark but I'm glad they worked things out! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
iwritelovestories chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Aw! That was super adorable. And I was listening to Passion Pit as I read it, so it totally doubled the effect(:
I like how you acknowledged that getting stuck in an elevator with a cute boy was a cliche, because otherwise, it would be a cliche. Do you know what I mean? I thought it was a nice and realistic plot, and Mark's reaction to realizing it was Emily in the elevator was very believable.
I did think Emily was a bit harsh when she was talking to Mark at the end, but having her strict criteria for guys is what you already showed, and it would definitely have moved too fast if she was like, yeah, totes let's date.
So overall, lovely story!(:
fictionfan chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I love this story so much! And i love the characters too! You really make the characters come alive in my mind! Can you continue this please if you can? I'm officially your fan! :D
LadySimonOfWhiteBlueEyes chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
I like the personality of Emily. I also love the story. I'm grinning! Thank you for writing this!
Preposterous chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
So cute! Mark is an adorable dork.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
loved it!
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
That was brilliant ;)
InkWitch chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
I like your writing and I like the overall story, but I really hate the character Emily Collins. Mainly because I think that having a 'list' is just too sadistic AND masochistic because HAVING a list just kills a relationship and, well, I dislike girls who have lists. But overall I REALLY LIKED IT!
non.graceful chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
It's one of your first pieces of work and already you have a lot of reviews, my my my aren't we just the talented one? :P It was cute, well obviously. I have no good criticism although, I wish I did because then I wouldn't have to sound like a love struck teenager!

Good luck with your next ideas for stories :D

44musicfreak44 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Aww, totally cute story :D
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