|Reviews for Still|
| Time To Change chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I thought the minimal punctuation worked well in this one. Very image-provoking descriptions. Powerful last line.
| ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
This one was blatant, and very powerful. You have a way with strong imagery, I really enjoy reading your work - it's raw and fresh.