Reviews for je t'aime
RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
The language you used gives this such strong, raw emotion. Your use of punctuation, mainly the repetition of &, was interesting. Why did you choose to write &&?

I've seen your work before. I like it.
skersey chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
You have a lot of interesting lines in this piece, like "I'm pushing a thousand bullets, my darling, && we've just sucked all the poison off each others teeth." This poem, in general, demonstrates how hectic love can be at times (?) It's also interesting that you use two ampersands after words. Why is that?

Only suggestion: I don't mean to be incredibly picky, but the title should actually read "je t'aime"

Keep writing!
merwings chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
I like the part crashing cars through the rain, really makes me picture the raindrops splatting across the windsheild and about hitting the traffic lights like its an actual force.