Reviews for Breaking Giselle
Lara Starsky chapter 1 . 11/29/2022
He's a rapist and a pedo. Why tf would you romanticize pedophilia and raping? You're sick.
Uc chapter 20 . 9/27/2018
Captivating story
Guest chapter 24 . 7/19/2018
Df
Guest chapter 15 . 1/6/2018
Omfg i sat up and screamed hallelujah when she miscarried. God I hate kids. But seriously. Against the pill? You have to be fucking joking. That’s such bullshit. I’m done with this crap
Guest chapter 9 . 1/6/2018
Looks like it’s time to pack up the minivan and head down to planned parent hood! Get out those wire hangers folks
Guest chapter 15 . 10/23/2016
Post it. Some peps would like it because your a great author I love this story I just wish you made it harder for Jayden to like Gassile and for him to be not so nice but a bit harsh perhaps, like he still punished her a bit.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
Make more
IDKOU chapter 22 . 8/22/2015
great-awesome-romantic-obsessive-dramatic story!
Nidchat chapter 24 . 5/18/2015
beautiful story
Anon chapter 24 . 12/1/2014
A few flaws here and then, but overall a lovely story.
You sort of overdid it with how beautiful/gorgeous she is and hence the number of times Giselle gets herself into rape situations...
The royalty thing was a nice twist though.
SundayMorning73 chapter 10 . 11/17/2014
Spoilers regarding a few problems I have with the story.
Ok my thing that I feel like is way over the top is the whole "I have to protect her from all the men that lust after her" bit. I mean how realistic is it for someone to have numerous rape attempts in a span of what, a couple weeks? It just seems a bit out there. And for him to have this actual master slave complex would take more to break I feel like. Also why is she just so quick to understand that he RAPED her. I feel that should be a bigger deal that it was made out to be. The cops would def have a search out for the missing person that was spotted as well, once they checked into the background (they said her name at the front desk) they would see she didn't show for work and so on and so forth.
Just some things I felt could be tweaked to give a more believable feel to the story.

I do like your reference for King Street though :)
Grespitchied chapter 23 . 10/17/2014
I was pretty surprised by the flow of the story.. There were moments that I didn't expect at all. It made so much sense why she kept getting attacked. I doubt anybody is THAT attractive! But ... Yeah ... The cole explanation made sense. HOWEVER... THE PRINCE THING kinda felt unreal... DUKE, yeah maybe! but Prince is kinda... I just expected him to have more security if that was his case. And what was in the cargo? And what country is he a prince of? If it were some less known place the I. Guess its fine because the only royal family Id recognize would be England's HAHAHAHA I love her character though.

Curious- didn't he mention his dad was a druggy? And what happened to Giselle's parents?
rediflyer chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
Great story, Kept me in suspense and has just the right amount intimacy and teasing
Carmel March chapter 23 . 6/11/2014
Wow, I am so glad you told me about this story, and I feel silly not knowing about it before reading Protecting a Prince! I loved it, of course, I love Giselle and Jayden and seeing how their relationship developed. From the first chapter, I couldn't stop reading. The writing was excellent and the plot held my interest the entire time. Thank you for posting this! :)
Luontoiti chapter 11 . 5/11/2014
Turned bored
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