Reviews for cocktease
Sepulchred chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
You're brilliant. I love pretty much everything you've written.
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
...this is really - i don't know - kind of creepy. in a good way, though - i absolutely love it. i had to read it through several times, actually, because i liked it that much. and it takes a minute to decide what you think of it.
skersey chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
The first stanza is very imaginative, with hair being a "mane of mahogany sunbeams" and her "lips like hibiscus blooms full to bursting with snatched poetry."

The ending's also really cool, with the different age perspectives. Good job, keep writing!