|Reviews for Summer Verse|
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Lovely piece, but first off - aaaah, it's not a sonnet :S A sonnet is a fourteen line poem, each line made up of iambic pentameter. Sorry to be picky, but it's a fact ;
The writing, however, is excellent. The line "wild fish dancing a tango" is an outstanding bit of imagery, and I also loved "summer's story", "the sun rains down on me", and the alliteration in "collect a clover". I wasn't quite sure of the choice of "graze" in the final line, but I might just be missing something there.
So all in all, please rethink the title for the sake of my sanity, but the poem itself is great - it really captures the essense of summer.
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Awee thnx so much! That sounds like the perfect summer ever :D
The imagery and personification really stand out
And liven it up _ thank u :D