Reviews for Apple
Bastard From North chapter 93 . 5/31
Shouldn't you be asking nicely like
" Hey, we are creating an army! Wanna join us? "
I think stabbing people isn't exactly the best way :D
So Chris and Thug has joined the dark side! I wonder just what
is going to happen next? :P
Great chapter and nice quote :D
Bastard From North chapter 92 . 5/31
So that was the thing they were talking about in the radio :D
You decided to leave two charters away from the story? O.O
I am moved... I don't have to remember more names :D
I think the camera in the face could make a good part of antifun
video XD
And by the way, your quote before in the previous chapter
" If we don't end war, war ends us "
" If you want peace, prepare for war " ( Can't remember who wrote that)
Basically, it's endless circle of war :D
Great chapter, you saved me from more names XD
Bastard From North chapter 91 . 5/31
Kuno, did movies... Rather weird ones...
Ignoring that for a moment, Thug and Chris forgot the whole breaking in part
quite fast O.o The magic of stealing girlfriends? :D
I don't like Kuno anymore, not one bit XD
Good chapter Phantom :D
Bastard From North chapter 90 . 4/14
Waaaaait, Karly isn't Karly? O.o
So Karly is actually demon kinda thingy and Karly is somewhere
in the demons place? Did I miss something? :P
But the question is, can she be saved from where ever she is? O.O
Now this is interesting :D
Bastard From North chapter 89 . 4/7
Yay! James after long time and he is returning! :D
Though now he has to leave Cynthia all alone, with weird
chicken stuff :D Kinda scary obsession O.o
Great chapter Phantom, sorry for late review :P
Guest chapter 87 . 3/7
Great job as usual
SupaSaiyanGamer chapter 87 . 3/6
This was a good chapter bro. That was quite the emotional moment between Anita and Toshiro. Got a little creepy at the end, but I guess that was the point :p it was a great chapter overall.
MysteriousFire chapter 62 . 3/3
He was introduced in chapter Two XD Breaking the fourth wall again :D
You really made me nervous at the mysterious visitor part.
Gunnar! I remember him!
MysteriousFire chapter 61 . 3/3
That quote xD
Sticky and Chris getting their first dose of magic? "And tell your friends I said boo" EPIC XD
"When do you ever believe anything Max says?" LOL
Oooooh we meet Teresa's twin sister!
MysteriousFire chapter 60 . 3/3
They're sneaking out with such a big group XD Tell me again, how did that work? In the Apple universe? XD
Karly's threats make me shiver...
"They were the only people that kept this place familiar." I like that line!
Max, undercover, wants to go on a slide. Why did I expect anything different?
And now they're all playing... in a park... Apple XD
Aw I don't know if I want Teresa to meet Lindsey...
Bastard From North chapter 87 . 3/3
Karly just doesn't give up, does she... :D
So Toshiro and Anita cannot date, maybe because of her parents? :P
Well, Karly was almost nice, though she seems to hate everyone she meets :D
I think asking some one on a date with email or text is normal these days XD
Maybe it is just easier :D
Great chapter and nice quote :D
SupaSaiyanGamer chapter 86 . 2/24
I see what you mean by a lot of shipping. This was a cute chapter, and funny too. I don't know too many people who ask to date over e-mail XD chapters don't need to be long to be good.
Bastard From North chapter 86 . 2/24
Well, that was fast XD
I like the guy already, his attitude towards anyone is
awesome XD Or I am just messed up :D
I have no idea how to say that name, really long O.O
Great chapter again! :D
And nice reference with the water there ;)
It possibly couldn't be related to manga called Ranma 1/2...
Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 66 . 2/5
...Teddy, you should stop being human and just become a bear.
Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 65 . 2/5
The angsts of teens. Oh well. Not much to say here except drama galore or soap opera. I can basically sum up James, "Oh, I can't stop thinking about her, what's this feeling in my heart" and eventually he realizes he's in love with her. Okay. Well, it's a side story, so I get it. Yay. Go James, you can become the next James Bond.
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