|Reviews for Apple|
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 10 . 3/27
I seriously love the fact that they know they're in a story and they make comments about the plot and chapters, all that XD
I somehow think sticky likes Jane :)
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 9 . 3/27
I love that your story is funny but it has serious backstory stuff too
It's awesome :)
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 8 . 3/27
I love that this all took place in such an amount of time it was the next day at lunch time before they got food XD really amusing
I'm glad that Harold was able to heal himself, i was like 'for real he's gonna be in a wheelchair for the rest of the story?!' glad he's not :)
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 7 . 3/27
I'm sad about this chapter poor donald
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 6 . 3/27
OMG This chapter started out normal enough i mean as it could be with harold being terrified and all that, and then it went to complete chaos i can't believe it XD
'You're a vessel? That's a type of ship right?'
probably the best line of the chapter XD
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 5 . 3/27
XD OMG HE'S AFRAID OF CLOWNS
CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER XD
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 4 . 3/27
That's mysterious, i hope Toshiro is involved in the story later on considering he's jimmy's child...or was i suppose T_T
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 3 . 3/27
OMG something tells me that him being a mage is going to be a big part of the story
XD I CAN'T BELIEVE MAX IS LIKE 16 AND HE STILL HAS A BUNCH OF TOYS LOLLOLOLOL
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 2 . 3/27
HA their baby came from a stork XD
| Rumors of War chapter 53 . 3/16
Still following the story, you really have an attention to detail, as they say, "The plot thickens" I really get a kick out of these kids, keep it up.
| Bastard From North chapter 53 . 3/16
Teresa!? What are you doing here :D And I guess I figured who killed Jimmy :P
Eugene is in love with a killer who wants power and Jimmy is trying to warn him, this is interesting :D Mental note, never, and I mean never drink wine...
Great chapter! :)
( Sorry the late reviews : / )
| Queen-Knightess chapter 7 . 3/10
I love the name switch: Donald McRonalds.
| Queen-Knightess chapter 2 . 3/10
Harold is an interesting character! Haha! " Where do we buy one?" That just made me laugh out loud!
| Bastard From North chapter 51 . 3/9
Ooooh, more secrets :P
It seems like Jimmy and Eugene are friends of some sort :D and guarding a girl with an interesting book...
This is going to be interesting...
| Rumors of War chapter 50 . 3/2
Another great chapter, hey phantom when you were talking about the bald old man loading up on doughnuts and cake I thought you were talking about me Hah! Again, a very interesting and funny chapter I certainly love your droll sense of humor, keep it up