|Reviews for Apple|
| MysteriousFire chapter 27 . 4/21/2013
Melina? You gotta be kidding me! Wow, I didn't see that one coming!
Melody, I liked your name but I hate you! Why use Jane like that? She doesn't deserve this!
Toshiro, don't start thinking about Regina like that! It's Anita you belong with!
Why do I keep shouting at your characters? xD
He should've gone inside and save her from Melina!
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/20/2013
Awesome \(o)/ I love your work ()
| MysteriousFire chapter 26 . 3/31/2013
Is the principal the Bald Old Man? :o I'm wondering now if the Monopoly man is bald, but I think he is...
I like the principal being serious though. I agree on everything he says about power!
| MysteriousFire chapter 25 . 3/31/2013
I don't like Regina... I can't figure her out
why does James' changing face interest me in a way? xD
"sort of a Halloweenish, mixed with Voldemort and a Batman villain", haha perfect consoling Sticky! I like him in this chapter though
I'm wonding if his right eye can shed tears now...
No Regina don't you dare!
| MysteriousFire chapter 24 . 3/27/2013
Being chicken of a chicken... brilliant xD
So I have a little bit of time to read which will be spend on Apple! :D
Max is a little slow, and he proved it 5 seconds later!
Regina do not sit between Toshiro and Anita! You wanna say something with that, don't you Phantom? She's gonna drive them apart? NO! I won't let her!
Haha when Veat stood up and they all left, the message was clear lol, why did Regina go with them though
I feel sorry for Jane in this chapter. Maybe because I have felt just the way she does. She does need new friends in that case. I like Melody and I love her name!
"That chapter 12 was named after", finally some more breaking the 4th wall :D
"He kept trying to convince me that Clucky was a real chicken", gotta love the principal xD
Kristen why do you ruin the chicken lesson?
Girls fighting? They must really hate each other.
Now I wanna read more but time is up, so the next chapters will be for friday or saturday. I hope this long review make sup for me waiting so long to review
| DarknessesDownfall chapter 24 . 3/17/2013
I don't like either girls. They both urk me and I feel like clawing out their eyes. With that said R and K can be the unmentionables for me
| DarknessesDownfall chapter 23 . 3/17/2013
I vote that the chicken gets plunked and cooked for dinner! :D I think the principal is like a worshipper of chickens or something like that...Chickens are noisy and smell bad!
| CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 25 . 3/12/2013
oh my gosh _ WHAT IS THIS!? GAH PHANTOM YOU ARE MAKING ME FAN GIRL AGAIN DX
Naw James has a crush X3
0_0 oh gosh...he has to watch his feels then...and looks like Sticky is backXD
and Toshiro...I understand that the ladies like you but think of how she hurt your feels in the past SHE CANNOT BE TRUSTED! DX
| CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 24 . 2/23/2013
omg XD James in the costume pff
and MAX STOP GETTING YOUR ANIMALS MIXED UP DX
0_0 oh dear NO SHE CANNOT BE BACK!
CHICK FIGHT DX
| MysteriousFire chapter 23 . 2/11/2013
Clucky the... Education... chicken... what did I just read? xD
lol I'm actually quite positive Max and Curtis really ARE brothers. They talk in the same way!
And Regina, get your hands of Toshiro! Stupid girl!
"forcing him to hug a chicken", this really sounds bizarre if you don't know the context.
I want another chapter! :D
| CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 23 . 2/9/2013
XD oh dear gosh a CHICKEN!? XD
D: poor Curtis...VEAT I WISH YOU THE BEST OF LUCK!
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/9/2013
This is awesome. I love it :D can't wait to read more.
| DarknessesDownfall chapter 22 . 1/29/2013
Pfft! Boys are so easily distracted by food XD
I'm pretty sure Curtis is my second favorite now...he's so adorable X3
TOSHIRO DON'T TRUST HER! STAY WITH ANITA YOU DUMMY!
Thaaaaanks Tommy Boy! I loved it! Stay awesome!
| CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 22 . 1/26/2013
wooo another chapter!:D
yay! adoptions and CURTIS STAYS! :D haha he and Max will get into even more trouble nowXD
oh noes not the tacosXD
hahaha YES GO MNEME! GET THE REVENGE! ah cold muffinsXD yep sounds like something I would curseXD
0_0 oh no! Not Regina DX noes! Toshiro...walk away now or tables will be flipped :I
| ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 22 . 1/26/2013
lol now I know why you called her Veat... so she could rhyme with Pete!
I wish the cafeteria ladies at my school were that nice :(
I thought at some point that Toshiro and Regina would meet again...