|Reviews for Apple|
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 49 . 1/31
The Blood Ball. I knew it was some kind of weird name and Eugene, Ted and Karly were right to be suspicious about it. Killing other mages to become a more powerful mage? How sneaky of them. Oh boy. I do want to laugh at how Lindsey and her father are going to track down five hundred thousand mages and kill them one by one over the course of "the next few years". That's pretty unrealistic and downright impossible. And considering how Karly, Eugene and Ted are still alive, it's safe to say they failed.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 48 . 1/29
Wait, what?! What happened to the fight? It ended just like that?! And all of a sudden Max is in the middle of a test!?
And that evil Melina. I feel sorry for Teresa, why can't she meet her mother? I'm also curious to know who her mother is. Actually, I thought Eugene was her REAL father, and now I find out that he isn't and Teresa has a real father with her mother. Um...okay. Whoops. I must have misread it somewhere or forgot that Eugene wasn't her biological father. My bad.
Anyway, this is getting more interesting, and like me, Teresa is going to ignore Eugene and Melina and look for her real parents anyway. No, they are not her "real" parents. Eugene is her real father, I don't care what anyone says. They are merely her "biological" parents. They provided the genetic material, nothing more. Eugene was the one who brought her up, he's her real father.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 47 . 1/29
When will Eugene ever change back to a human being? Sigh. I feel sorry for him. And how dare Max crack Eugene's Chronos' Watch!
Anyway, at least we get a show (in Eugene's words, anyway). Yay.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 46 . 1/28
Aw jeez, did you really have to change Eugene into a fly?! Did you watch The Fly too many times? Oh well. I hope he changes back to his human form. I hate flies.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 45 . 1/28
What the hell...this was so random I'm at a loss for words. All right, I'm not going to eat pizza for a long, long time. I wonder where Eugene disappeared to.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 44 . 1/28
No. Just no. Leave Jane alone, you bastards.
Not much else to say here, nothing much is happening.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 43 . 1/28
This is ridiculous. I'm not sure how a mentally unstable person took over as principal, but she belongs to the nuthouse more than a school. And I agree, Melanie/Melina/Karly is annoying. I can't stand her too. I miss Ted, the guy was awesome.
And Sticky got himself into a sticky mess with that weird dream of Alice's.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 42 . 1/28
Good work, Dan! Shut that stupid project down! And I'm confused. Isn't Alfred Eugene's father? Why is he calling his father by his first name? "Why hasn't anyone arrested Alfred?" Really? That's not how he should address his father, right?
I'm curious, who is Teresa's mother? She's not Karly, right? That bitch broke Teddy's heart, and I'm going to kick her ass if I can.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 41 . 1/28
This is too short for me to write a review, so I'm skipping ahead.
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 40 . 1/25
I agree. Sometimes you have to let go of the ones you love the most. Poor Teddy, but I'm sure he'll get back to his feet. I look forward to seeing him in future again. The Rise of Teddy: A principal reborn. Joking.
Anyway, this was a good arc, I hope the following arcs will be great as well!
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 39 . 1/25
YAY! Max is saved! Finally! For a main character, he isn't exactly very useful. Hmm...I wonder why. This isn't the first time he got captured, and he hasn't done anything of note yet. No wonder the other characters such as Eugene were more popular (if I remember correctly). At least Jane was brought to justice...somewhat. Now let's destroy the diary! Oh wait, Eugene already burned it. What the hell am I saying...
Anyway, looking forward to the progress! I hope Jane grows up and becomes stronger after this little episode!
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 38 . 1/25
Yeah, Mother Teresa! You have to save Plain Jane! That evil Melody is not going to get away with this. Grr...I do hope Jane reconciles with her parents one day. It kind of sucks, and yeah, I agree. Money isn't as important as spending time with one's family. Family forever!
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 37 . 1/25
Sorry for the lack of reviews, I've been busy. Basically school started for me, and I'm kind of handling a lot of administrative work and homework and readings the past week or so (which is why I didn't write anything as well!). Anyway, glad to be back to read your story. Let's hope Curtis and friends save Max and Jane!
I feel sorry for Teddy. He should have just been a bear instead of a principal. First he got rejected by Karly (or whatever her name is - she has so many names), and now he needs to be comforted by the students. Good thing Teresa and friends were up to the task. Go, Teddy, go!
| Bastard From North chapter 85 . 1/12
Hey! Don't stop the chapter like that! :O
How I am supposed to know what happens now? :D
I like noodles, they are awesome :3 They are addictive :D
Though it is creepy to meet a guy you saw in you're dream O.o
I can't wait to read more! :D
| Bastard From North chapter 84 . 1/12
That deal sounds awesome, some diary granting wishes and a demon living inside of you...
What could possibly go wrong? :D
" Give demon your finger and it'll take the whole hand " thing going on here :P
( Some random quote I heard many times XD )
I can kinda understand both of them, when others want to be
accepted by the "normal" people they want to be different and
to be noticed :P I guess they want to :D
But the price seems kind big :P