|Reviews for Dead Wrong|
| Kirihime chapter 24 . 9/12/2013
Soooooo beautiful. I'll admit I was getting misty at the end. Too sweet.
| smashthat chapter 24 . 6/9/2013
Oh wow! That story had me all over tje place. When tjey came back alive I thought I was going to die over here. Great job.
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/28/2013
AWW I LOVE THIS CHAPTER
THE DIALOGUES ARRE AMAZING
the end phrase:- dead wrong
has soooo many meanings attached to it
;( i cried at this story... itz amazinnngggggg
keep writing please? - sweetnsour96
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
I ABSOLUTELY FREAKING LOVE THIS CHAPTER!
especially the end
seth manned up finally!
where do u get ur ideas ffrom
oh, i forgot
YOU HAVE AN AMAZING MIND!-sweetnsour96 ;)
| allancaldera chapter 24 . 3/10/2013
Really good story at the end all of them were happy :)
| Peacock Slayer chapter 24 . 3/4/2013
| GrangerDanger333 chapter 24 . 1/6/2013
This is a really brilliant story. I only found it the other day but its kept me pretty occupied reading it all. I enjoyed this so much. Seth and Brian were pretty err.. obtuse, and frustrating, the whole way through because they both loved each other but they didn't tell for so long! But that's partly why it was so good :D
I really like the role of the two girls and the goddess woman. And I got really excited at the end of ch.23 at Seth's line about being dead wrong! Omg :) Made me so happy. And the whole bit when they realised they were alive was so well written!
Heh. Really nice work writing this. And WOW! You wrote it all in one month! Impressive :)
| Kenny Deheart chapter 24 . 11/20/2012
Not much to say, I loved it.
| KatieBobb chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
| Smokey chapter 24 . 9/2/2012
I've cried so much during this story. Thank you so much for this. MY best friend died of Leukemia when I was little and it's haunted me for a long time... I think this is the most at peace with it I've ever felt.
Thank you so much for making such a great story. The characters, the situation, the ending... it was beautiful
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/24/2012
Not normally the kind of thing I read, but I have to admit it's getting harder and harder to stop myself from crying
| binnyboo chapter 3 . 7/17/2012
rolling in the deeeep? xD
| Skyless11 chapter 24 . 7/11/2012
... this... was... amazing. I nearly cried. I didn't, but I nearly did - which is more than what a simple novel can do to me. So yes, this wasn't a simple novel. It was an AMAZING novel.
Beautifully made characters (And I just love how you didn't stop at the two main characters, you constructed a whole mini-world)
Surprising plot-line (surprising 'cuz it's full of surprises)
I especially love how you made a world with two different... poles? centres. The first time it seemed like the centre of the world was the Hospital, and everything revolved around it. I just couldn't imagine anything happening outside it, it just felt so incredibly natural that it all happened there. And then, Seth's Mom's home. Again. The same story. It's so interesting how you made that!
and, since praising isn't as constructive as criticizing, I feel indebted to say something, I guess...
But thinking about it... I don't have much to say... Probably that deadline thing... it went kinda smoothly and all too obvious. Maybe you should've made it sound more... I don't know... mysterious? Vague? when the old lady said , again, it's not like it's something wrong. It still fits the story perfectly well xD
oki I'mma stop here because I'm dying on deciding what the next story by you I should read xD
| Hot Tiles chapter 23 . 3/24/2012
Really good story! Cool idea with the whole dead thing.. :)
| Lykan chapter 24 . 2/15/2012
Another excellent story! A different style, but still pulled off well. Your characters have believable emotions, they fight, love and cry like real people. Only a gifted writer can truly pull that off.
Okay, let's see . . . you know your myths, that's for sure. The whole ghost thing was a little out there, but I loved it. And Emma, well she's just awesome. We all need an Emma in our lives, and the world would be a better place.
I hope to read more of your stories, and of course that you'll write more. You're too talented to let your skills go to waste.