|Reviews for the paradox of the mouse and the muse|
| punctured.lungs chapter 2 . 8/6/2011
oh man, i love this.
| skersey chapter 3 . 8/5/2011
I love the subtle conflict within the poem, specifically the parenthetical phrases. It really shows how confused this imaginary girl is. Very well done :)
| smoke another grin chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
I love the images, I love the reality. I love all the different places the words appear and all the ways she leaves her mark.