Reviews for Stretch and Spark
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
That's pretty deep. It reminds me of when I'm with someone, but their mind seems to be somewhere else.

Jrake chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Oh, I love this! Reminds me of how far me and my boyfriend are across the ocean. :)
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
There's a nice flow to this and the ending is especially strong. I think leaving out "just then" in the second line will make it read better.

Keep writing!