Reviews for persephone
abstract settings chapter 9 . 10/6/2011
Love this collection, a great ending. :)
darkershadeofpale chapter 9 . 10/4/2011
So, you know, this.

it's gorgeous.

Hades and Persephone have always been a habit of mine, and I'm not quite sure why.

this is beautifully written, and some of the chapters? poems? pieces? just ... astound me.

I especially like six.

it's short and wonderfully meaningful, and you could've spun it out into something much longer, but I'm so glad you didn't.

The only thing I didn't quite like, was the little bits and pieces of yourself - that comes off really horrible, i know, but I think, if you're telling their story, it's just sort of excessive when the narrator dips her toes in, unless you're going to make a thing out of it, and you kind of just leave us hanging. You give us only a very small piece of you, and I would love to see more. That's all.

In any case, I also quite like your definition of Persephone as a halfling, not really happy wherever she is - but still drawn to hades, even though she craves the sunlight. Yes. It's wonderful.

. darker shade of pale
abstract settings chapter 8 . 9/21/2011
Love it! :)
uniqueinmyveryownway chapter 7 . 9/13/2011
yay! just got round to reading more if this EPICNESS!

I love how u write!
abstract settings chapter 7 . 9/12/2011
Love it! :) Keep writing.
abstract settings chapter 6 . 9/9/2011
Great :)
abstract settings chapter 5 . 9/8/2011
Love this, keep going. :)
abstract settings chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Love this, amazing writing!
uniqueinmyveryownway chapter 5 . 9/7/2011
little bit un poectical at the end! but on the whole, a good 2 chapters!

believe in her chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
this is beautiful. I loved the last stanza especially.
uniqueinmyveryownway chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
this is the first thing I have read on FP! I really liked it! keep going !

Hisa-Ai chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Ooh, I just love this! It's so amazing! Great job!

Keep writing.

Peace out,

AngelaRochelle chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
amazing amazing amazing!

Love it! everyone should read this poem!
classic violet chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Sad yet gorgeous. Good job.
scoz chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
this is really good. I love the whole feel of it, the spin you put on it. great job! (:
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