Reviews for Revenge
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
it's short, but powerful. Nope, i don't want to get into your mind at midnight
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
No understanding, eh? Fine.

I can't help but relate, though. Anyone who's just been talked down to or looked at funny knows that feeling of belittlement and discomfort that slowly turns to anger.

It must be surpressed, or you'll be remebered as that "freak who snapped" because you "couldn't take" the CRAPSACK WORLD. Y'know...Become a pee stain on the plane of existence.

One that will evaporate.

...Oh, and, this was good but short. Keep writing! :)
PetalsFromTheForest chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Cool... This sounds like the beginning monologue to a really kickass story or comic book. It reminds of Kill Bill a little bit, actually. Awesome job :D
Neuravinci chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Nope, not gonna try to evaluate your midnight mind :)

reminds me of Columbine, or maybe the Saw movies.