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paralian chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
i love the simplicity of the poem. though only 5 lines, this poem conveys a powerful sentiment and observation.

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M. Soames chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Some of the most beautiful moments in life are those nobody else can see (at least in the way this poem's narrator sees it), so much so that it's incomprehensible nobody else has ever seen something at once simple and direct and astounding in its image. Such seems to me the case here.

Edifying.