Reviews for Fire
Ray-Anne chapter 84 . 6/26/2015
That took forever to read. Probably should have split them into three separate stories like they were. But it was a really well written story. It was also rather complicated. Despite that it was easy to keep track of all the characters, and each had a good definitive personality -which can be hard.

I have to say my least favorite was Derry. I was really rooting for Grady. Hah. Oh well. It was really so well written and you obviously put a lot of thought in it. Despite how long it was nothing got confusing and I didn't see too many plot gaps. I never really truly understood the extent of her powers or exactly how she visualized. Was it just metaphysical or an actual image of strands? You'd think the importance of meditation would have come up.

But really, congrats for writing such a piece. An accomplishment and a half I'd say.

Bueno
Erin chapter 68 . 4/10/2015
"You did can do it with Sumairs," she reasoned. "Why not with us?"
Erin chapter 38 . 4/10/2015
I miss you.
Guest chapter 84 . 2/11/2015
Its good. You should be proud of such a well rounded story.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 54 . 11/5/2013
Amazing chapter! *blushes* I kinda figured... I actually didn't realize they thought she was a Sumair, so I got a bit confused there for a moment. I love it though! I can't wait to see how things turn out! Hopefully this last attempt will work...
When will you be updating your other series? I remember it well, and I kind of miss it...
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 52 . 11/2/2013
Amazing chapters! sorry I haven't reviewed the last bunch. I had to re-read to figure out what's going on. In a way, this kind of reminds me of Twilight... but not really. It's just the characters' personalities and appearances sort of. Have I said that before? I can't remember... anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update!
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 48 . 12/19/2012
Amazing amazing story so far! it got a bit confusing near the end here with all the different people and problems, but I still understand to an extent what's going on. I think this is the biggest cliffie yet, so I really hope you update soon!
The characters sort of remind me of Twilight in a way... I'm not sure if that was intensional or not.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
clara954 chapter 46 . 8/26/2012
This chapter is very well done. The multiple personalities are interesting, but I like seeing Sheyla's thoughts the best. Please update again soon!
SofieAnn chapter 27 . 9/25/2011
I love all the close updates! We have learned so much! I knew they were Sumiars! I can't wait to see how it's going to end and how it's going to grow from there! I am addicted to your stories!
Tina95 chapter 27 . 9/25/2011
So she was right all along. Ha, take that, Tally!

I really love how her mom is 'Superego'. It makes so much sense and helps make a connection between them.

In the description of this story, it says that this is Volume 1. Does that mean that there will be a sequel?

Anyway, wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading it!
clara954 chapter 27 . 9/25/2011
I am continuing to absolutely LOVE this story. PLease update again soon! ;)
Tina95 chapter 22 . 9/23/2011
He he he. I like that parting line. Sheyla is great.

I just realized that that family is perfect for Ryan, Shyla, Declan, and Tally. Isn't that a little... unlikely? That all are from the same family...?

Great chapter, anyway! I can't wait to read the next one!
Tina95 chapter 21 . 9/18/2011
Her her her her her. I like Derry's mom. She's really cool.

Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!
Tina95 chapter 20 . 9/16/2011
I love Ryan. I think he's my favorite character right now. :)

Great chapter! I loved the description and I can't wait to read the next one!
Tina95 chapter 19 . 9/12/2011
Hmmmm... I really liked the information you gave on Tally. It shows that maybe her view of herself is a lot different from how we first see her. It explains a lot of her reactions and such, actually.

Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!
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