Reviews for Don't Look Back
Loqwell chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I rather liked this poem. In a way it's so simple, but it can be broadened to mean just about any way forgetting/ignoring the past can come back to bite you (from something individual to a something on a world-wide scale). It also had a nice rhythm to it, although when I first read through the poem I stumbled a bit. One thing I did want to point out was the use of "your" instead of "you're" in the second to last line. :)

Loqwell
The Blue Fairy chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
How freakish is it that not only did we both post a poem called 'Don't Look Back' tonight but that they *both* start start with the same line? That's just plain weird...