Reviews for The Love of Sin
Sinner999 chapter 5 . 8/15/2011
While I'm intruiged by your plot line, which is original and interesting enough to keep me reading, your writing style falls a little flat for some reason. It's not all the sentences, but a majority of them just don't flow right together. I think it's just a matter of practice, really. Oh and while I love the character of Rachel, I would work on making Kaname a little more relatable. Her reasoning and confusion seems a little non-cohesive at times. But over all with time and some hard work I feel like you could be quite a fine author :)
Piciesgurl101 chapter 7 . 8/14/2011
This was a beautiful chapter :)
Piciesgurl101 chapter 6 . 8/14/2011
Damn. Iris reminds menof Professor Umbridge from Harty Potter for some reason :(
Piciesgurl101 chapter 5 . 8/14/2011
Rachel! Was this the end or is there more?
Piciesgurl101 chapter 4 . 8/14/2011
It's sweet how rachel handled the drawing :) I want a Rachel haha
Piciesgurl101 chapter 3 . 8/14/2011
Lol rachel is an amazing girl :) so brave of her to defy the law
Piciesgurl101 chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
Awww this was really cute :)
Piciesgurl101 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I just found this now and I can't wait to read more :)