|Reviews for Endless Life|
| Laoch chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Another poem that seeped emotions from it. Like the other, I enjoyed the steady flow because it seemed to make this have more depth in it's own way. Also, I liked the way you described the girl, because it was so easy to picture and feel her anger/confusion/emptiness and the last line in itself was very telling as well. Lovely.
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