Reviews for dear old dad
Midnight voices chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
"and you wonder, from time to time -

if he hadn't blown his own brains out,

would you have done it for him?"

I wonder that sometimes, if I ever saw him again, what would happen? Thank you for your amazing writing
paralian chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
i love the bluntness in this piece, like the other reviewer mentioned. i loved the descriptions in the 2nd stanza, and the ending is perfect. ties it up so well.

new to fictionpress, i would love reviews on my work from a writer like you. it would mean a lot.
arrhythmias chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
i really adore the harshness of your writing. it's just so blunt and so /real/ and hasdfjkas. /if he hadn't blown his own brains out,

would you have done it for him?/ it's so brilliant it's insane.