|Reviews for Inane insanity|
| Sepulchred chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
So the story you tried to put across was nice, and easy to understand, because of how clear your words are, but I have a few issues with how you've phrased things and some of the punctuation you've used (this is a personal thing - your writing oozes Singaporean-ness, which I was never really a fan of, even though I know it's what we learnt in school). There were also a a sentence or a word missing here and there, which made the transition from one line to the next kind of awkward. Maybe you should reread it?