Reviews for Patience
A Fire Rose chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Great concept! My own general criticism is that there isn't really a set rhythm to the poem. Of course, not all poems have one, but it makes it less choppy. However, I love these lines -

"with cat-like grace and mystery,"


"the rich, elaborate beauty of a lark in song."

My gosh, I love your descriptions.