Reviews for Book 1: Attachments Chapter 7: Clarke
disrhythmic chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
AHH, CLIFFHANGER. -giddily rushes to ch. 8-

Oh wait, reviewing. Okay, Joseph and Naomi's argument was great. Really emotional and well-written. :) And poor Naomi... it must suck to have 'savior of the world' foisted upon you...
disrhythmic chapter 4 . 8/29/2011
I wish there were a way to insert a dramatic 'DUN DUNNNNN!' here. :P I love the humor - it's a nice break in between all the insanely convoluted scheming going on. :) "Did you smother David yet?" Classic. XD
disrhythmic chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
What I really love about this series is that everyone has a reason for doing what they do. The bad guys aren't just warped by greed and bent on world domination or anything cliche like that - they're actually trying to better the world, just in a really sadistic way. It's a lot more interesting that way, when it's not just black-and-white. :)
disrhythmic chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
Ooh, I like the conflict between laying low and putting themselves in danger for the greater good. Nice touch. :) And, of course, Lisa... the plot thickens! :D
disrhythmic chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Jane and Joseph are adorable together. XD

["Jane, what did I tell you about using her ability in broad daylight with innocent people and cameras around?"

She looked like a little kid that was being reprimanded, "To not to."] That reminded me of Cars. Love it. :D