Oh my god. This story is absolutely amazing! Super well written. AMAZING. N the message. Just god. Amazing.

Honest to god, this story truly touched me. I've bookmarked it on my computer, because I feel as though I'll be likely to re-read it again.
All the best,
J

I have to admit, I bawled my eyes out reading this story. You're a very talented writer

Gosh, I'm such a sap. I'm crying from this by the way... I loved it. I didn't believe someone would actually kill off one of the main characters. But you made it work.

I can't believe you have only 9 reviews. More people need to read your story. It's tragic and heartwarming and funny at times. It has fascinating characters, a solid plot, and story arc. Perhaps best of all, you're a fabulous writer.

Thank you for posting.

Good story, don't really like that she died but I get it. But you made a mistake, it's the Lords Resistance Army, not republican, and it's 90% abducted children.

Absolutely amazing. It was so sad, yet Charlene dying was the only way the story would have worked.

Thank you for the story.

Bittersweet and very well written. Thanks for the enjoyable read.

I cried so hard.

I'm so sad.

First of all, that real is my username. Second, why does this sound like that girl commits suicide by jumping off a bridge? Not even kidding. He's all sad and saying he was never going to play again. He also said he would change ONE thing. Why do I think that one thing is having her not commit suicide?

Interesting story! )

I'm curious as to how the prologue ties in with the story though.. Is Tory giving up the limelight to pursue Charlie?

I can't wait to read more! )

This is super, super good. I haven't read any of your work, but if this isn't some of your best I cannot imagine the rest of it.

Your dialogue here is fantastic. He seems so in love - so devoted. Just wow.

seems very interesting so far. the tone is definitely different from your other recent stories. Can't wait to see what happens with this one.

I liked this prologue; it's piqued my interest! It's very well written and it raises a lot of questions.

A line I found especially good, as it contained humour as well as insight to the character of the girl and the nature of the relationship, was: "He would have given her the world, but she would have told him to put it right back where he found it."

A very nice beginning and I'm looking forward to reading more!