Reviews for Riffs and Roses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. This story is absolutely amazing! Super well written. AMAZING. N the message. Just god. Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honest to god, this story truly touched me. I've bookmarked it on my computer, because I feel as though I'll be likely to re-read it again. All the best, J |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit, I bawled my eyes out reading this story. You're a very talented writer |
![]() ![]() Gosh, I'm such a sap. I'm crying from this by the way... I loved it. I didn't believe someone would actually kill off one of the main characters. But you made it work. |
![]() ![]() I can't believe you have only 9 reviews. More people need to read your story. It's tragic and heartwarming and funny at times. It has fascinating characters, a solid plot, and story arc. Perhaps best of all, you're a fabulous writer. Thank you for posting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story, don't really like that she died but I get it. But you made a mistake, it's the Lords Resistance Army, not republican, and it's 90% abducted children. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing. It was so sad, yet Charlene dying was the only way the story would have worked. Thank you for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bittersweet and very well written. Thanks for the enjoyable read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried so hard. I'm so sad. |
![]() ![]() First of all, that real is my username. Second, why does this sound like that girl commits suicide by jumping off a bridge? Not even kidding. He's all sad and saying he was never going to play again. He also said he would change ONE thing. Why do I think that one thing is having her not commit suicide? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story! ) I'm curious as to how the prologue ties in with the story though.. Is Tory giving up the limelight to pursue Charlie? I can't wait to read more! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is super, super good. I haven't read any of your work, but if this isn't some of your best I cannot imagine the rest of it. Your dialogue here is fantastic. He seems so in love - so devoted. Just wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() seems very interesting so far. the tone is definitely different from your other recent stories. Can't wait to see what happens with this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this prologue; it's piqued my interest! It's very well written and it raises a lot of questions. A line I found especially good, as it contained humour as well as insight to the character of the girl and the nature of the relationship, was: "He would have given her the world, but she would have told him to put it right back where he found it." A very nice beginning and I'm looking forward to reading more! |