Reviews for the clock struck twelve
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
This poem is the kind of thing I've been needing to find for a long time. Thank you.
playing in gasoline chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
The formatting here is effective. I think I've said this in every review, but you display emotion so well.
playing in gasoline chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
Again there is the subtle element of control here. In my opinion, this is more beautiful than the first. The emotion seems more exposed here, and it is wonderful.
playing in gasoline chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
You paint a very good image of taking control.

A great beginning, for a pillowbook especially.