|Reviews for the clock struck twelve|
| TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
This poem is the kind of thing I've been needing to find for a long time. Thank you.
| playing in gasoline chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
The formatting here is effective. I think I've said this in every review, but you display emotion so well.
| playing in gasoline chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
Again there is the subtle element of control here. In my opinion, this is more beautiful than the first. The emotion seems more exposed here, and it is wonderful.
| playing in gasoline chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
You paint a very good image of taking control.
A great beginning, for a pillowbook especially.