I love how you have twisted myths. So well thought out...

Wow. This story is truly unvbelivable! :)

Whoaa.

Awww. Hope they will be okay..

Haha. This story is so entertaining. :) I love the way you switch the personalities of Zeus/Jupiter/Thor.

Haha. Twisty twisty. I'm loving this story so far! :)

Haha. I definitely like officina. :)

This is really good. I enjoyed Detail's/Dione's POV. Thanks :)

I couldn't help but laugh when Thor said 'stare at my nose'. lols

Wow. really engaging well thought out adventure. i had fun trying to figure out the 'imagination' part, i thought it was 'existence' or 'reality' lol. i also quite liked how both the main characters changed almost without notice, very well done indeed. the only thing that drove me up a wall was the random moments of epiphany during the actions scenes, truthfully i skipped nearly all of it, but i guess that just means Dione was very well fleshed out, since it seemed about her above anything else.

i enjoyed this. thank you.

It took a week but it was worth it. This was a great story, with good characters. I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you for posting.

Such a cute ending! Lol when I first started reading this, I honestly had no idea it would end like this but that doesn't matter because I love love love this story!

geniusgeniusgeniusgenius Have I mentioned how you're a creative mastermind? I love what you did with this whole battle scene :D

This is definitely one of my favorite chapters in all of the stories I have written on FP :D I'm so proud of Dione for breaking free from the myth and creating her own destiny! I also have to comend you on how brilliantly planned this story all is! It takes a true wordsmith to meld so many stories into one!

This world of the gods seems so complicated and complex! Kudos to you for somehow being able to create and express it! Oh, and I love your concept with the split personalities and Zeus/Jupiter/Thor's struggle to deal with who he is )