It was so beautiful!

Sob! SO beautiful!

It was awesome.

It's a great ending.

I'm so sad it's over.

Any other ending would just feel wrong.

But I still feel like I just lost a friend.

Can't wait to see what you write next.

Freaking awesome!

I just- whoaaahhhh. WHOAAH.

It's over! ;A; I'm almost sad this is ending, I loved the story so damn much!

Firstly, the battle scene at Ragnarok was awesome, I loved the detailed explanation! And Dione trapped inside the World Serpent, aah, I really thought Thor was going to kill her at a certain moment...

And the beginning of everything with Dione was just wonderful. Really, it was so believable, it's amazing. I can keep on raving about how you portrayed all the characters so lovely and in depth, how I adore the way you describe the surroundings... (or just, you know, the way you write in general)

But I'll shut up for now ;

Just, WOW, again! I really love(d) this story, wonderfully written and just marvellous! (You should totally write books, just sayin. :D )

Thanks so much for uploading this, and I'll certainly check out your other stories!

Oh my God, it ends already? But it's beautiful! I give you that. Did I give a rating of 8.9/10? On second thought, 9.2 would do more justice.

The philosophy behind Loki, Dione, Ragnarok, etc. are, oh my, so deep, this is definitely not one of those shallow or sappy romance stories. This story, as a whole, has so much elements combined elegantly and masterfully.

Good job. I have to admit, the best story I've read so far in FP.

This story is beautiful. I love love love it. So well-written and thought-provoking. I love the down-to-earth humour and the realistic, three-dimensional characters. I like how everything is woven so elegantly together the myths, the enlightening philosophical musings and intellectual banter. I especially like how the ending was so neat and gives a peaceful sense of closure. Best story I've read on fictionpress!

Well I really loved this story. The way you wrote it and the depth you gave to the characters is simply amazing. That, and the fact that you didn't make this a sappy love story with too much drama, screaming and other sappy actions that kind of irritate me in other romances.

Well, I can only congratulate you, really. This was quite brilliant.

Love,

- Ed

You are DEFINITELY hands down my favourite author on this site, I unfortunately have no paypal or credit card but am in the midst of nagging my friend to help me buy your stories...

Seriously, this story has just blown my mind (and kept me indoors all weekend), I honestly wish I could have your skill dedication to writing... I just don't know how you do it. Well done!

Amazing, unexpected and wonderful story! I guess I'm a little like Loki and get bored easily, but you managed to surprise me on every turn, never predictable, always keeping me on my toes. Thank you!

Nicely tied up. An overall brilliant story. Thanks for sharing.

I've been checking in every hour to see if you've updated. That's how obsessed with this story i am :D

Le gasp!

:O! But she can come back alive, right? And how the hell is she his wife if Hera is? What's going to be doing with that?

[At the very sight of Jormungand, I would have wondered, golden-beard would have started tearing away at the beast with god-like fury.]

I would have thought** or I would have assumed** works better there then wondered.

Loki is... I mean... why is he so positive that she'll bring him back? She discovered she was the goddess of imagination like fifteen seconds ago, unless the only way for her to bring herself back she'll have to bring him back?

But why does he believe that he'll come back stronger and in full glory? Or maybe he just needs the illusion of a new start? So if he had tried to start over again as Loki the way he is he'd continue to blame his actions on the Norse gods and the like but now that he's been killed and reborn and he has 'broken' out of his myth he believes he'll have full control over his actions?

Even though we know that he has had the choice all along.

I really like that she came into her own and that her power was something I wasn't expecting even though I knew it didn't have anything to do with details, or at least, not details alone.

It would've been interesting to see how her as Heimdal would've played out since I think he's Odin's halfbrother so that would've put the story a bit on its head romance wise, lol.

I wonder if Thor is going to have a hand in pulling Dione back to herself.

And can I say, the fact that Officina/Details is the goddess of IMAGINATION is crazy. But I mean, she has spent centuries pretending to be human, and while it might not seem all that imaginative it could be viewed as the Queen of France pretending to be a shepherdess. So lost in her own mind and playing at being mundane because she's stuck in a role she wasn't meant for she ends up losing her head.

Great chapter as usual, I wasn't expecting him to kill himself even when it became clear that things weren't going to go as expected or that he'd try and kill Dione.