Reviews for Explosion
PancakeCity chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
I highly enjoyed this :). Keep up the writing!

Katherine
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I adore this. Completely describes me. The summary drew me in, and the piece didn't disappoint. I especially loved the lines:

"I warned you,

but it's ok,

because if I disappear,

I will disappear being me,

still me,

always me."

It's exactly what I feel, but you put it into words. It's as though the crazy has become you, and you don't really want to get better, because then you'll lose yourself. Adored this.
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I loved this but one thing. It flows better if you keep each line the same length.
Raineescape chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Very Deep and emotional! I like it. (: