At first I didn't like it much but- but- as I continued to read it I realized how interesting the humor and dramatic tension with the pre-teens was! Hah! Whoever thought that wouldn't be interesting is an idiot... Myself included -.-

It was well written! I've realized that you're quite new here, so I can only assume that you're also almost new to writing? We all get better with time and continue to do so even if we're brilliant.

~ Grace

Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see how the story progresses!

~Katalina

SO well thought out, and probably true!I mean I wouldnt know, I'm only 12 and going into 8th grade!:)

~~Leeann