Reviews for The innocence of being guilty
StaresAtGobosWithMe chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Oh, write more! I want to see what happens next. It was good, although I have to point out a few things. A detective, unless he is very new to his job, would have more class and experience in dealing with people like Evelyn. I honestly don't think that the detective would be scared of her. I understand what you are trying to do with the reversal of the power thing here, but I think that you have to keep in mind the situation and the reality of it. Good job though, and keep up the good work!