|Reviews for What's Inside of Me|
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
creepy, but good story
| HiddenCreek chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Interesting... um... heehee... can't think of anything else to describe this but I can tell you that it was great and I could not stop reading - I even read it again afterwards :D Great Job! :)
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
"And most murderers are close to the victim..."
Hm. Nice work!
| disrhythmic chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Creeeeeppy. :) Love the description, very well-done, and the main character's tension... just awesome. :D
| iheartpercyjackson chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
ughhhhh. good job. " I desperately needed that knife; I required that butcher knife to ease the pain of what was inside of me. How could she not understand? Did she not have this same internal feeling?" xP .trigger.
| Margo Jill chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Yes. Yes. Awesomesauce.
| logan89 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Wow! This was very good, your writing gave me the jitters as I was reading this. I could vividly see her with knife in hand, working on her masterpiece. I am looking forward to reading more of your writing. Thank you for sharing.
| Sophia Alexandra chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
i thought this was really good and scary. i like how it was like a poem with the way you expressed the characters feelings. nice job. check out my book paranormal agency also if you want
| Revenge Is Bliss chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
This was incredibly well written, although I found a few minor mistakes. The details you put into this really shows that you worked hard on this. You're obviously a very talented author.
I really liked how you made it seem as if she wanted to self-injure in the beginning. It was a great twist. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but either way it was very good. Overall, this was a great piece.
| i dont wana chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
It's amazing how you described it...
What exactly was going on in your head when you wrote this?