|Reviews for Broken Heart|
| ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
This nearly made me cry, because it just brought the whole day back on top of me. I love these lines:
"She always thought that a broken heart felt like someone has ripped her heart out but no, it was different. She could feel her heart breaking, and she wanted to rip it out herself. She wanted to reach deep inside her chest with her bare hands. A few times she thought of taking a knife and carve the horrid thing out. It would be better if it was out, at least she wouldn't feel anything."
Because it's exactly how I've felt for the past three months. It hurts so much, and you just wish it could stop. First loves are such tragic things, when you think about it. I love that last line, I agree with it totally. Thanks for writing, I really enjoy your work.
| Belieber24 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
This story captures everything that a broken heart is! Good work! Keep writing!