Reviews for The Way You Make Me Feel
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I like this :) You and your friend have a similar writing style, which means the piece works well, like two sides of a conscience, rather than two different people.

I really loved these lines, mainly because I can relate :D :

"I gave you my heart

But you left It there in pieces"

And also that last stanza, that feeling of being trapped, really reminds me of a situation I was in a while back. And sometimes being let go isn't what you really wanted. It hurts a lot. Really good work :)