Reviews for Mute
Vivechka chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
I particularly enjoyed the last two lines. This really does sum up poetry, and in such a beautiful way!
zhui chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
I think this idea already applies for a lot of people who aren't mute but don't express themselves well in person - including me, haha. I always feel that the written word is more eloquent than spoken. Great poem, especially for something written in ten minutes! I love the idea you used here.
I Sing My Own Song chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
This is beautiful!

I really wish I could write like this at 2 in the morning.

I think my favorite line (although it's hard to choose, the whole poem fits together so well!) is "the grace in which the letters curve together in wet ink"

Perfect.

Isabelle
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
:) that really descibes poetry!
chlodochar.wolf chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Hmm, yes. I believe that describes writing poetry accurately. During some poems, I've actually cried. Sometimes, even those who /have/ tongues dare not use them...

I find that writing in the late hours or soon after waking is often very poignant. Good job!

As a side note, should there be a semicolon in the first line? I'm not sure.