|Reviews for Mute|
| Vivechka chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
I particularly enjoyed the last two lines. This really does sum up poetry, and in such a beautiful way!
| zhui chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
I think this idea already applies for a lot of people who aren't mute but don't express themselves well in person - including me, haha. I always feel that the written word is more eloquent than spoken. Great poem, especially for something written in ten minutes! I love the idea you used here.
| I Sing My Own Song chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
This is beautiful!
I really wish I could write like this at 2 in the morning.
I think my favorite line (although it's hard to choose, the whole poem fits together so well!) is "the grace in which the letters curve together in wet ink"
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
:) that really descibes poetry!
| chlodochar.wolf chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Hmm, yes. I believe that describes writing poetry accurately. During some poems, I've actually cried. Sometimes, even those who /have/ tongues dare not use them...
I find that writing in the late hours or soon after waking is often very poignant. Good job!
As a side note, should there be a semicolon in the first line? I'm not sure.