Reviews for Mistake
elderwolves chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Hey, just published my own story today, too! Cool... anyway, the grammar was good, as was spelling. My only problem is how short it is and the lack of events. But as they say, 'Every good building needs a sound foundation'. I hope you have an update on the way, cause while this isn't much, it certainly has a lot of potential.