|Reviews for Rainstorm|
| flooded lungs chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I love this piece :) especially the way she's warned of the train coming. It's such an abstract way of talking about suicide. It didn't sound exactly like that though. Brilliant
| Unfounded chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
One small thing: when you said 'was surrounded by an aurora', did you perhaps mean 'aura'? An aurora is different, and I think aura fits more with what you were saying.
Other than that, it was a good piece. I didn't understand the significance of the red lights, though you talk about them often. Paired with the whistle, though, is it perhaps a train? Maybe a suicide attempt?