Reviews for Perfection
Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
This was an interesting piece, and a thoughtful insight. I liked the three different sections to this, and how they were linked to the theme of perfection.

You used some nice metaphors here, for example "stringed beast", which added to the idea of needing care. Your prose throughout was pretty solid, and you've put a lot of thought into this piece. Well done.

Katie.
Jakuho Raikoben chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Like the review before, the diamond metaphor was really spot on. A diamond seems perfect to most people but they don't really think about its flaws. I liked the way that perfection is only viewed in our point of view and nothing really is perfect.
disrhythmic chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
The diamond metaphor was completely new to me and absolutely spot on. Beautiful. :D