Reviews for Book 1: Attachments Chapter 8: Honor thy Mother
disrhythmic chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
OH. MY. GOSH. Wow, Naomi's in trouble - very much trouble. O.O That was intense!

One nitpick... "complete 360". 360 is a circle. You mean 180. :)
disrhythmic chapter 4 . 8/29/2011
I love the contrast between Joseph's bitter attitude and Jane's innocent outlook. Makes for a great argument, that's for sure.
disrhythmic chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
Oh, jeez. Poor Naomi (again). :( The whole repressed/tampered-with memory thing explains a lot. I was wondering how she wouldn't remember something as important as burning three people to death. :P The twists continue. :D

"Jane read three psychology books." Just brilliant. XD I can absolutely picture her thinking, "Oh, sibling tension. What would Freud do?" and then going to the library. XD
disrhythmic chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
Wow, talk about psychological scars... poor Naomi. :( I wonder, does Joseph know/suspect? And if not, how will he take the news? Hmm...

On a happier note, Kyrie's got a date! :D
disrhythmic chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Again, DUN DUNNNN! Gotta love Kyrie's sarcasm, too. :P