|Reviews for Bride in the Bath|
| my poor toaster chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Ooh! Its like... Theyre the same people.
| Lia Jenson chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Twisted and it would've been lovely if not for the errors. Get some commas, a period or two, and then properly slam her face AGAINST the hard floor over and over again. Yeah.
Work on the style and grammar, and I'm sure we'll all be clamoring for so much as a scrap of your stories. :)
| xXToyingWithIceXx chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Ooh, that was super chilling! And what a nice twist ending too! :) I love reading horror stories first thing in the morning for some reason, I don't know why. :)
You seemed to have a lack of commas, especially with like, dialogue and stuff. But that was literally the only thing that bothered me cuz this story was so phenomenal that I only noticed after I glanced at it again. :)