Interesting...

So amazing! Very clever and creative! Original too! Loved it a lot! Great job :)

This story reminds me soo much of Meg Cabot's The Mediator but other than that it is an amazing story.

I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. It is really awsome... and cute. I just wanted to continue reading without stoping. You are a good writre. :D

Wow this was an incredible story. The plot was wonderful, original, and very imaginative. The story was well written. I liked the characters, they were believable. I liked the riddle, it was well written and I can see you put alot of thought into it, the whole concept actually. I don't see why she didn't break into Mel's room for the magic book though because it seems as if it would have had alot of answers about Jess. That would have been my move as soon as she suspected Mel was involved. Also she searched the internet about the missing hiker and didn't find anything, since he went to her school, wouldn't she have searched the newspaper much sooner? But these are just little things lol. The story was great and I loved reading it!

I love this story ! Its addicting ! I spent almost my whole afternoon reading it :) I couldn't stop ) You are also a very good writier , good job ! :)

Unfortunately parts of this literally had me bursting into adorable little giggles. It was utterly embarrassing.

Loved it.

wow I really loved this story thankyou so much the idea was soo original and story well written can't wait for a new story :D

I loved this story! 3 I liked that there was a newer concept to supernaturality here.[: I thouroughly enjoyed this, I didn't stop reading it until I was finished.

This is honestly one of the best stories I have EVER read on this site. The plot was original, the writing was fantastic...and the characters were lovable ) I can honestly say that I could see this book being published. Keep up the awesome work! I'm off so go read more of your writing! haha :)

ooh haha shouldnt have typed such a long review earlier. you've introduced conflict! xD

ooooh this is definitely my favourite chapter! i squealed when he talked about her moving in with him. and then... the math pick-up lines! my gosh, did you google those? hahaha

yay! this world about shadows you've created is really intriguing. the random stuff like blue moon facts is cool too. let's me know you've done your research :) the only thing i find lacking is their relationship. they're sweet with each other all the time... im not sure if it's realistic. any deep relationship usually goes through conflicts, which strengthen the relationship. and im not just referring to romantic relationships. of course, i could also be a bit biased cos i seem to thrive on conflict, so i tend to prefer those love-hate relationships and find this couple rather sickly sweet. i have to say, i was expecting something very sexy and mysterious due to the way you started it, so that might make me dislike the fluffiness more than i usually would. but im enjoying this anyway.

tantalising... by the way, even if it's a vamp, i'll still keep reading cos you write so well :) but i have to say, it doesnt seem like it's going to be the common werewolf or vampire story. excited to read more!

ooh this is sending shivers down my spine. a pleading voice on the wind, eh? xD i hope it's wolfies. not so into vamps. other magical creatures also can.