| Reviews for Blue Moon |
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   Daddy's Little Peach chapter 14 . 9/20/2011 Kia Ora, Neat story! I love your riddle, it's really cool! I suspect the 'burning the way' is the spellbook, but I suppose I shall have to wait and see! The concept of them kissing weirds me out a bit, but I suppose it is a 'ghost' story of sorts. A few bits of criticism - the scene of the first blue moon when they're searching didn't come across as very desperate to me. If they truly thought that it was the night they had to find him, then I would have thought they'd be pretty much panicking; instead it was kinda like they looked, couldn't find him, so went home. Maybs think about fleshing it out a bit more so we can relly see what the characters are feeling. Also, I'm curious as to Jesse's quirks. So far, all I can really say about him is that he's blonde and likes math. Given that the story is told from Sam's POV, this doesn't strike me as enough to make her fall in love with him. Try including things like the way his nose crinkles when he's thinking hard or something like that - just little cutesy things that endear him to her. Keep it up, can't wait for the next update! Mish xx |
| TasteTheFreakingRainbow chapter 15 . 9/20/2011 magic! sorry i felt like randomly yelling tht... |
| noriepie chapter 15 . 9/20/2011 so cool! i want to see an aurora! yeah that's my reaction. my second reaction is...man, hot chocolate sounds good about now. and tasha's awesome. i'd be a bit like her. third reaction is some seriously loud warning bells about livi. |
| Princess97 chapter 15 . 9/20/2011 How do you know all this scientific stuff? When I try to search up things, I never find any interesting scientific facts. Yay they found another piece to their puzzle! |
| TasteTheFreakingRainbow chapter 14 . 9/20/2011 niiiiice chapter |
| noriepie chapter 14 . 9/20/2011 i knew mel got burned by jesse and she was vindictive. I knew it! they're so sweet together btw, sometimes it's gag-worthy sweet. But sweet nonetheless (I secretly love it) |
| Soothsayer35 chapter 13 . 9/15/2011 I sort of figured it was Mel's doing, but her conceit and ego that Jesse is "hers" sort of floored me! I hope that witch gets her comeuppance and SOON! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 13 . 9/15/2011 Can't wait for more! |
| noriepie chapter 13 . 9/14/2011 oh. my. god. where did that come from? mel just turned vile in less than an eye blink. i had a feeling she was jealous. poor mel, can't face a broken heart... but gosh, very bad for a girl with power on her hands. |
| Princess97 chapter 13 . 9/14/2011 Mel's entrance was a bit scary. |
| sandcastlesinthesand chapter 13 . 9/13/2011 WHAT A CREEPER! GOD MEL WHAT ARE YOU DOING NO GO DIE GIVE HER JESSE'S BODY WAS SHE LIKE CREEPILY IN LOVE WITH THEM WHEN THEY WERE LIVING AND THEN HE REJECTED HER AND SHE MADE HIM INTO A SHADOW THING ON THE HIKING TRIP? Sorry, I am really excited right now. GAH. I'm like really nervous right now. So much suspense. HE CAN'T DIE! |
| TasteTheFreakingRainbow chapter 12 . 9/13/2011 nice last two chapters i really wish he would get his body back soon :( |
| noriepie chapter 12 . 9/13/2011 Im forever attached to sam and jesse now I keep on thinking his body is somewhere near a lot of pine trees. Please have a happy ending! And is mel a witch? |
| TasteTheFreakingRainbow chapter 10 . 9/10/2011 this story is really good update soon please! i hope Jesse gets his body back soon |
| Princess97 chapter 10 . 9/7/2011 So Mel is probably the girl with him in that hiking thing. Red and green winds either mean Christmas time, or the light at the time of a lightning storm. A trade- Sam finds out about something which she can't tell Jessie about. A lie- she has to lie to him about the 'something'. someone must die- she has to die if she wants the man of her dreams to ever live a normal human life. one and ten is probably January 10th, the day of a blue moon or a lunar eclipse, when it creates abnormal shadows. Jesse's body must be burned in order for him to become normal again. Idk. random guesses. Any of them right? |