Reviews for One Nation
Acheron Starcrown chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Thank you very much for writing this. I've never been big into poetry,but once I saw the summary,I had to read this. I think that so many people have lost their confidence and love in the United States. So many people spit on and set on fire the flag that it's absolutely deplorable. It's like a breath of fresh air to see someone standing up for the United States of America;my home and first love,with their words in such a simple;unassuming way. We ARE the greatest nation on earth;and anyone who doesn't see that,is blind. We give so much to the rest of the world without asking anyone to give back what we gave because we are caring;giving people,putting others before even ourselves. But what happens when we need help? Nothing. No one comes to our aid,not even our suppossed allies except for maybe Israel.

Israel is our only ally in this entire world now;and if Obama keeps going the way he's going,they won't be our allies for longer.

God bless AMERICA and god bless YOU for writing this beautiful poem!