Reviews for Eyelids
BookcraZzaY chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
...interesting take on lies- this portrays it as like the death of sanity-even though everyone lies I guess...really deep
BookcraZzaY chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
haha-love the first 2 lines made me snort my water

don't know why bt this brought one image through my mind VIKINGS! haha...perhaps I should just say greet job on the deepness of these poems

they each have different flaws and emotions which must take forever to capture into any kind of poem...
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
its like an emptiness...thats what this poem reminds me of...