Reviews for Parasite
donxcat chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
A great story. Well written. The title had me confused at first but after finishing and reflecting I saw the deeper meaning. Some times I feel like the narrator. I traveled extensively when young and now age has taken me in its grip I do not travel any more; not even to nearby towns. Thank you for sharing this. Don
ToeshoeMezzo chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Its a good 'dark' song, but it isn't very dark. I mean the relationship seems like abuse, and the protagonist knows it, but it doesn't seem dark. Its not all sunshine and rainbows, but it isn't bloody street corners and broken limbs either. Nonetheless, its really good.
skersey chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Cool song :) It didn't strike me as DARK, dark, but it was striking enough to be really effective. I really like the chorus, it seems like it flows really well, and the semi-irregular rhyme scheme in the verses. The title's good in that it relates to the song. It's the material that counts not so much a drab title. Keep writing!