Reviews for Good Girl
KandaxYokoxGrell chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Loved it :)
Ezekiel Finch chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Hello there!

I really like the ideas that you are playing around with in this story. Can life truly be replaced? Do machines deserve empathy or sympathy? Does the service of a class above us justify the abuses of a class below us? These are some pretty heavy ideas you've got going on here and the lack of details, names, and direction force us to focus on these ideas and themes. It's a little harrowing, a little scary, but there's a lot of brain power going on here.

On the other hand, I felt that you got a little heavy handed when I read this line.

"I may be synthetic, but even false bodies have their limitations."

It felt a little cliche and a little preachy. If you tone down this sentence then we're all better but if you remove the sentence all together then you make us think. We have to find the theme and ideas in your story instead of being told upfront what it is and what we should be feeling.

Other than that, I think you've got something really interesting here and that you should explore it.

Good luck!

Ezekiel Finch