|Reviews for Lenora Street|
| YFIQ chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Reminds me of a assassin movie, interesting and have nice potential.
Looking forward to the second chapter.
Review can be returned on "Creepypasta".
| Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
The first thing I'll say is be careful of your sentences being too repetativie; a lot in the first half start with a name, and they feel repetative, kind of like "Burwell did this. Tucker did that. burwell did this then Tucker did..." etc. Maybe just change the structure around a bit. i think the start seems interesting, and the gossiping about Burwell's arrival gives a strong sense of the kind of community he has moved into, so good job on subtly describing the street. I look forward to see more of this.
| Rosemarysgraden001 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Interesting, it was a little hard to get into at first. But Im nevr been a huge stephen king fan. I'd be interested to see where the story goes and if i can get into it.
| Spiral Architect chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
So, the hyped story has finally arrived. Starting off: Things I liked. I loved the description of Dalton's anger at the moving team. The only thing I didn't really like was how short this chapter seems, but mine are about this length so that's minor. All in all, good job. Please return on Shadow Rain, thanks :)
-SA, Club Blitz.