Reviews for Sixteen
SimranVim chapter 3 . 6/6/2012
I really think you should have finished the story! I think it would've been great!
fabulouslycrushed chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
I wish you had uploaded more chapters... I feel like you're stalling the big, auction moment. :/ Anyhow, good story. It flows a bit slow, but good all the same. I didn't see any grammar errors. I liked it. Update sooner than later.
AurorA-Kojima chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
Another great chapter!
peppermint latte chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
I feel sorry that Eden has to through being ruled, but I'm extremely curious about what it'll be like...

Love and kisses,

peppermint latte chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
love it already
AurorA-Kojima chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
This is a very interesting idea. I've never seen anything like it, and you're describing things well.

Keep writing!

IzzyRoxTheWorld14 chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
This sounds like an interesting story, keep writing I want to see how things go with it...
w3ardo chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
the summary is good, and it seems like its going into an interestion direction. good job