That was beautiful and oh so interesting and your brilliant for thinking this up. I want to read this forever.

This was heart-breakingly beautiful. Tanner is such a darling, and his anguish at Japheth and Roz's dissolving relationship is very real, yet I still end up happy that Roz and Tanner find each other in the end. For a minute there I thought that you were going to make this a threesome, but this way it's actually more bittersweet, and more... real.

Also, giving Tanner synesthesia combined with Asperger's... I don't know if I'd have dared inflict that on a character. I especially loved the way Tanner says soothing words to calm himself down.

For a while there I thought Japheth was going to end up with Gloria!

I'm so sorry for Japheth, but he did seem to need to get out of it, didn't he? And Roz seems to want someone he has to do these things for.

When I stumbled back here to see just how many chapters of blush had been finished, I noticed this nifty little story here that I'd never seen before. Soooooooooooo after I sent the email, I wandered back on over to your lovely profile and decided to sit and read it. And OHMYFUCKINGGODONAJOYSTICK! I fell in love.

Love I tell you.

First I want to praise your skill yet again and then that makes me wonder why your fics don't have more reviews because honestly, and I'm not just saying this because we're friends, you're one of the best and most creative writers that I've found on FP and I'm soooooooooooooo glad that I did. How you thought of the concept is beside me because I could never... I just couldn't. You know your way around the English language far too well and I'm awed by this. Seriously, I read this whole thing in awe.

And I'm so in love with Tanner. His OCD was soooooooooooo cute and the word thing, by god, brilliance. Or is it a speech impediment? whatever, it was brilliant either way. I felt bad for him but from the start I wanted him to have Roz. and from the start, I just didn't like Japheth. Something about his being a ginger maybe... not that I hate gingers it's just that I can't imagine in my minds eye a gorgeous ginger guy. SO realy, I was hoping that he'd be edged out of the picture because it irritated me that I couldn't imagine him. Does that make me horrible? Hope not.

Anyway... the development between Tanner's and Roz's relationship was phenomenal and beautiful and the mouths touching was priceless. I was smitten from beginning to end. And I envy your talent because I could never do this.

So yea, amazing story and I think I want to read it again... which I'll do now.

Oh gosh. I liked this but its so SAD! poor Japheth.. I was sort of hoping for a threesome~ (: oh well still i'm glad it had a sort of happy ending(:

That was AMAZING. I don't even know how to put into words how I feel about it. Beautiful. You're an amazing writer.

Wonderful. It's very detailed. Throughout the entire thing, I couldn't figure out whether I like Japheth or not. He's just such a back-and-forth character. I did feel bad for Tanner, despite the happy ending, because he basically lost all his friends. One thing I kind of wished the story had more of were time specifics. Maybe I just didn't catch it, be how many years had he been in college? (More specifically, when does he graduate? At the same time as Japheth?) And how long has he been roommates with Japheth?

I do love it when I get alerts for your writing. :D

This was beautiful.

I almost cried towards the end. And I can't tell you how glad I am that the ending was so unpredictable (I honestly thought he might end up with Japheth :p)

And the words! :') So perfectly done. It really is a beautiful story.

Wow. Just, wow. This is a fantastic story. I adore the whole concept, and this is honestly one of the best reads I've found here in a long time. So kudos for the good job.

I love Tanner's quirkiness, and the end made me smile like a madwoman. heh. At first, I didn't really like Roz, and I think it made me quite sad that Tanner lost both Gloria and Japheth (interesting name by the way). But Roz kind of grew on me later on, so that's good.

I can't believe that I thought Tanner was going to end up with Japheth for like, the longest time. I feel kinda blonde haha.