we have a Lebanese proverb that says that the best words are the few ones that make the most meaning and sense (I hope I didn't butcher it with my amazing translation skills lol) but this poem reminds me a lot of this proverb... so small yet so effective and deep :)

I like this. The words capture the mood nicely. However, I was thinking that the last line should be 'And allow me to become an echo' instead of 'And allow me to echo'.

That's my idea because the poem's description says that we become echoes, not that we echo.

Regards.