Reviews for Torn Out
DiamondWolf14 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Wow...
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
It just leaves my heart empty...reading this

Fantastic job! (:
BrittanyMichaela chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
This is a very nice poem. One thing, though.

"Or maybe there is sun, I'm not sure

But it doesn't shine brightly anymore."

The rest of the poem rhymed every two lines, but the words 'sure' and 'anymore' don't really rhyme.

But all in all, I really liked it!
D. S. Eden chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Love this. The choice of rhyme is pleasing. Do consider developing this further if you can. It ends too soon in my opinion.